Strong Women Series #5 - Arriving

As I ready this post for publication, 

I critique my painting.

 I did change it (on Aug 1) because

there were a few things that aren't sitting well with me.

The update to this post 
with corrections is
for educational purposes. 

I posted the old painting and the corrected one below,
because

as I say in my banner at the top of the blog,

I am learning, always,

and hauling you along with me.

So here, with my 5th effort so far in this series 

are the progress pics for  "Arriving"  

and the final final. 

The photo above is my corrected painting. 

I took away the stark line between the yellow 

and the blue-gray,

and a few other things.

Here are the two paintings side by side ... 
"Leaving" & "Arriving" (older photo just to show frames).
I tried to match the paint of the found frame (for "Leaving")
and I think it looks fairly good.

So, until next time ...

I hope everyone is staying safe and being healthy.

 I send my best wishes for you

to

keep painting!

🎨